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--- ai12s/ai12-0445-1.txt	2022/06/14 23:39:33	1.4
+++ ai12s/ai12-0445-1.txt	2022/06/21 03:14:39	1.5
@@ -1281,3 +1281,58 @@
 
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+From: Randy Brukardt
+Sent: Saturday, June 11, 2022  2:01 AM
+
+Following are some fixes to the approved changed wording of the various FDIS 
+AI. There also were a few typos in the AIs (stray brackets, missing words in
+Editor's notes) that I won't bother to explain.
+
+I'm not quite done applying the new wording, so there might be another item
+or two on Monday, but I'm sending this now so that you can review it and
+highlight any issues before I button this up.
+
+[Editor's note: only issues relevant to this AI are shown here; others
+are recorded in other relevant AIs.]
+
+-----
+
+The Note 6.1.2(44/5) says:
+
+NOTE For an example of the use of these aspects and attributes, see the Vector 
+container definition in A.18.2.
+
+But 6.1.2 doesn't contain any attributes anymore, so this should just say:
+
+NOTE For an example of the use of these aspects, see the Vector container 
+definition in A.18.2.
+
+I added this to AI12-0442-1.
+
+In so doing, I noticed that 6.1.2(18/5) was in that AI, but that is not a 
+note or example -- it is in the wrong AI. So I moved that paragraph to 
+AI12-0445-1.
+
+------------------
+
+In AI12-0445-1, 10.1.1(24) contains two occurrences of "needed"; both should
+be replaced as follows:
+
+  * The semantic dependences (see below) are the ones {necessary}[needed]
+    to check the compile-time rules across compilation unit boundaries; a
+    compilation unit depends semantically on the other compilation units
+    {necessary}[needed] to determine its legality. The visibility rules are
+    based on the semantic dependences.
+
+This paragraph precedes the definition of a compilation unit being needed, and
+moreover is really not talking about the same thing.
+
+****************************************************************
+
+From: Tucker Taft
+Sent: Saturday, June 11, 2022  8:14 AM
+
+All look good to me.
+
+****************************************************************
+

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