CVS difference for ai12s/ai12-0425-1.txt

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--- ai12s/ai12-0425-1.txt	2021/03/18 06:29:54	1.3
+++ ai12s/ai12-0425-1.txt	2021/05/30 00:35:12	1.4
@@ -17,8 +17,13 @@
 !subject Presentation issues from public review
 !summary
 
-Various wording issues were noted by reviewers of Draft 29.
+Various wording issues were noted by reviewers of drafts of Draft 29.
 
+[Editor's note: These items are all added in the published Draft 29; these
+were discovered during the creation of that draft. This was done so that
+WG 9 review did not reraise these issues. This AI still needs to
+be approved, so some of these changes still could change.]
+
 !question
 
 (1) J.15.8(1/3) has two "and"s. Additionally, the simplified form adopted by
@@ -103,10 +108,6 @@
 
 !wording
 
-[Editor's note: Changes (1) and (2) were applied to Draft 29 of the Ada 202x
-RM, even though they have not yet been approved, in order that that draft be
-as accurate as possible.]
-
 (1) Replace J.15.8(1/3):
   The form for pragmas Atomic, Volatile, Independent,
   Atomic_Components, and Volatile_Components, and 
@@ -220,6 +221,7 @@
 
   <<Continuing as before from paragraph 16.>>
 
+(8) 1.1.1(14) should end with a semicolon (;) rather than a period.
 
 !discussion
 
@@ -244,7 +246,7 @@
 Low_Limit : @b<constant> Integer := Limit/10;
 Tolerance : @b<constant> Real := Dispersion(1.15);
 A_String  : @b<constant> String := "A";
-Hello_Msg : @b<constant access> String := Hello'Access; --@ft<@i< see 3.10.2>>>
+Hello_Msg : @b<constant access> String := Hello'Access; -- @ft<@i<see 3.10.2>>>
 
 !corrigendum 4.5.2(37)
 
@@ -346,7 +348,8 @@
   character (if any) is an open parenthesis, bracket, or space, then the 
   leading space of the image may be omitted.
 
-[Editor's note: some wordsmithing followed, resulting in the proposed wording change.]
+[Editor's note: some wordsmithing followed, resulting in the proposed wording
+change.]
 
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