CVS difference for ai12s/ai12-0047-1.txt

--- ai12s/ai12-0047-1.txt	2013/02/01 06:25:44	1.6
+++ ai12s/ai12-0047-1.txt	2013/05/09 01:32:24	1.7
@@ -1,20 +1,21 @@
-!standard 5.5.2(6/3)                                13-01-31    AI12-0047-1/05
+!standard 5.5.2(6/3)                                13-05-08    AI12-0047-1/06
 !class binding interpretation 12-12-01
 !status Amendment 202x 12-12-31
+!status ARG Approved by letter ballot (12-0-2)  13-02-25
 !status work item 13-01-07
 !status ARG Approved 11-0-0  12-12-08
 !status work item 12-12-01
 !status received 12-11-12
 !priority Medium
 !difficulty Medium
-!subject Generalized iterators and discriminant dependent components
+!subject Generalized iterators and discriminant-dependent components
 !summary
 
-The iterable_name or iterator_name of a iterator cannot be a
+The iterable_name or iterator_name of an iterator cannot be a
 discriminant-dependent subcomponent of a mutable type.
 
-The iterable_name or iterator_name of a iterator is not finalized until the loop
-completes.
+The iterable_name or iterator_name of an iterator is not finalized until the
+loop completes.
 
 !question
 
@@ -539,5 +540,26 @@
 
 Agreed. It's unnecessary, and might change run-time behavior. No reason for
 that.
+
+****************************************************************
+
+From: Tucker Taft
+Sent: Friday, February  1, 2013  9:41 AM
+
+[Relevant part of a larger message - Editor.]
+
+Two editorial comments:
+
+In AI12-0047, there are two instances of "a iterator" in the summary which
+should be "an iterator."
+
+****************************************************************
+
+From: Gary Dismukes
+Sent: Friday, February  1, 2013  1:12 PM
+
+[Relevant part of a larger message - Editor.]
+
+A nit: in the !subject, hyphenate "discriminant dependent".
 
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