CVS difference for ai12s/ai12-0020-1.txt

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Log of other versions for file ai12s/ai12-0020-1.txt

--- ai12s/ai12-0020-1.txt	2019/04/06 05:08:48	1.20
+++ ai12s/ai12-0020-1.txt	2021/01/06 07:29:48	1.21
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-!standard 4.10(0)                                     19-03-08   AI12-0020-1/10
+!standard 4.10(0)                                     20-01-06   AI12-0020-1/11
 !standard 3.5(27.1/2)
 !standard 3.5(27.2/2)
 !standard 3.5(27.3/2)
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@
          tag in the class-wide case).
 
    For an array type T, the default implementation of T'Put_Image
-   generates an image based on (named, not positional) array aggregate
+   generates an image based on named (not positional) array aggregate
    syntax (with '[' and ']' as the delimiters) using calls to the
    Put_Image procedures of the index type(s) and the element type to
    generate images for values of those types.
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@
    For an untagged record type, a specific tagged record type other than
    a type extension which meets the criteria described in the previous
    paragraph, or a protected type, the default implementation of
-   T'Put_Image generates an image based on (named, not positional) record
+   T'Put_Image generates an image based on named (not positional) record
    aggregate syntax (except that for a protected type, the initial left
    parenthesis is followed by "PROTECTED with ").
    Component names are displayed in upper case, following the rules for the
@@ -4177,6 +4177,33 @@
 Aside2: The description of Wide_Wide_Image starts "The implementation of 
 S'Wide_Wide_Image calls...". What else would we be talking about? That's just 
 noise, we can just say "S'Wide_Wide_Image calls...".
+
+****************************************************************
+
+[From the AARM review of Justin Squirek (October 2020) - Editor.]
+
+13/5: Another minor suggestion involving parenthesis:
+
+"...generates an image based on (named, not positional) array aggregate..."
+
+to
+
+"...generates an image based on named (not positional) array aggregate..."
+
+19/5: Similar to the last suggestion
+
+"...generates an image based on (named, not positional) record aggregate 
+syntax..."
+
+to
+
+"...generates an image based on named (not positional) record aggregate 
+syntax..."
+
+[Editor's response: This is formally a change in normative semantics, but it
+is clear from the parenthisized wording that this is the intended semantics,
+so it is better to say that normatively. Thus I processed it as an Editorial
+Review change in AI12-0020-1.]
 
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