CVS difference for ai05s/ai05-0190-1.txt

--- ai05s/ai05-0190-1.txt	2011/04/15 03:53:45	1.15
+++ ai05s/ai05-0190-1.txt	2011/04/30 07:28:36	1.16
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 Some applications need to keep tight control over heap allocation. For example,
 it is common for object-oriented applications to have many access-to-class-wide
 types, but few used for allocation. Another example is an embedded system for
-which is is inappropriate to rely on the implementation-provided pools.
+which it is inappropriate to rely on the implementation-provided pools.
 
 This can be done by appplying "Storage_Size use 0" to all types that should not
 have allocators, and explicitly specifying a Storage_Pool for the few others.
@@ -3452,6 +3452,28 @@
 of the AI - Editor.]
 
 Thanks you, Steve, for your help!
+
+****************************************************************
+
+From: John Barnes
+Sent: Thursday, April 07, 2011 5:26 AM
+
+!problem 
+
+line 4  is is  => it is
+
+!wording
+
+Under static semantics it is a bit odd to read
+
+if a storage pool is a pool ...
+
+I know it means as opposed to null but it looks odd.
+
+When is a door not a door. When it is a jar.
+
+
+OK generally at a quick read.
 
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