CVS difference for ai05s/ai05-0119-1.txt

--- ai05s/ai05-0119-1.txt	2011/02/01 02:52:09	1.7
+++ ai05s/ai05-0119-1.txt	2011/02/10 05:12:52	1.8
@@ -82,14 +82,14 @@
 Add after 9.6.1(42/2):
 
 AARM Ramification: This is equivalent to subtracting the UTC-time from the
-local-time. In North America, the result be negative; in Europe, the result
-will be zero or positive.
+local-time. In North America, the result will be negative; in Europe, the
+result will be zero or positive.
 
 [Editor's note: I was tasked with improving the original wording. But I can't
 see any way to do that without putting more detail into the wording than makes
-sense. The original wording implies an ordering and a sign, it just not crystal
-clear. But I *can* put that detail into an AARM note, and then the intent is
-clear.
+sense. The original wording implies an ordering and a sign, it's just not
+crystal clear. But I *can* put that detail into an AARM note, and then the
+intent is clear.
 
 Since we're not making any actual wording changes, perhaps this should be a
 ramification?]
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
 
 If we were to require that these operations work without any time zone
 bias in all cases, we would effectively be requiring that the underlying
-implementation by UTC Time plus a time zone indications. (Other implementations
+implementation be UTC Time plus a time zone indication. (Other implementations
 would have problems at some boundary or other.) Beyond being incompatible with
 many existing implementations, this would be a fairly heavy implementation on
 targets that don't have much time zone support.