CVS difference for ai05s/ai05-0005-1.txt

--- ai05s/ai05-0005-1.txt	2011/04/02 07:30:35	1.37
+++ ai05s/ai05-0005-1.txt	2011/08/17 00:24:10	1.38
@@ -2241,6 +2241,14 @@
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 From: Christoph Grein
+Sent: Tuesday, February 22, 2011  2:41 AM
+
+10.1.4(7.a) ... their legality at that time. A{n} implementation model in which
+the environment consists...
+
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+From: Christoph Grein
 Sent: Friday, April  1, 2011  2:28 AM
 
 !topic Extended membership test
@@ -2275,8 +2283,60 @@
 it fixed.
 
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+
+From: Gary Dismukes
+Sent: Sunday, April 17, 2011  12:23 AM
+
+[Part of much larger message, see AI05-0264-1 for rest - Editor.]
+
+One AARM typo I noticed:
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+
+AARM E.2.2(20.c/2)  Typo: "(otherwise there would be a signficant..."
+
+"signficant" => "significant"
+
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+From: Christoph Grein
+Sent: Wednesday, July 6, 2011  7:43 AM
+
+3.10.2(22.ii) The above illegal statements are illegal because the accessibility
+level{s} of X and Y are statically deeper...
+
+If you doubt the plural in this case, note that you use plural form in the last
+sentence of this para ;-)
+
+3.10.2(22.hh) procedure P (X: {in out} T) is  -- because...
+                ..
+                Ptr1: A1 := X'Access;  -- OK (if X is a variable)
+
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+From: Christoph Grein
+Sent: Thursday, July 14, 2011  7:55 AM
+
+13.11(43.b/3) ...A collection is an amorphous collection of objects ( mainly used
+to describe finalization of access types);...
+
+There is a space after the opening parenthesis "( mainly".
+
+"An X is a so-and-so X" sounds weird. I guess the first term "collection" means
+the Ada 83 technical term, the second the general English term. This has been like
+this since Ada 95, but I find it odd.
+
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+From: Randy Brukardt
+Sent: Monday, July 18, 2011 10:45 PM
+
+...and not very helpful. Especially as the technical term has been reintroduced
+in Ada 2012. I changed the second "collection" to "grouping". Not quite as "pretty",
+but more likely to be helpful.
+
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-Editor's note (April  1, 2011): All of the items above this
+Editor's note (August 10, 2011): All of the items above this
 marker have been included in the working version of the AARM.
 
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